"Sharp. You walked in like you belonged and the ask landed clean."
This is a real Feedback Mirror verdict.
Record two minutes. Find out how you actually come across — free to start.
The diagnosis
You are not the problem in this pitch — discipline is what separates it from a 90. You hold conviction through the ask, the rep most founders never develop, and the narrative has a spine. The one tell: a flicker of doubt on the word "cold," landing on your most vulnerable line. Close that single gap and you walk in with nothing for them to grab onto.
The moments that mattered
The 3 that moved your score. Tap to step through.
You glanced away on the word 'cold.'
Right as you said the deal goes 'cold,' your gaze broke for nearly a second. It is a small tell but it lands on your most vulnerable line. Hold the camera through the discomfort.
"And then the deal goes cold — and you never find out why."
The breakdown
What fed the 79 confidence rating. Longer bar = stronger. Short bars are where the next session pays off.
The receipts
What you said, marked up. Strikethroughs = critical. Underlines = weak. Green = strong.
Drill next
Re-record just the closing ask — the last fifteen seconds.
Hold the camera the entire time. Do not blink on the number.
Deliver the ask with no gaze break and no vocal softening.
Raw metrics (nerd mode)
{
"paceWPM": 148.2,
"hasClose": true,
"hasOpening": true,
"hedgeCount": 2,
"durationSec": 92.4,
"fillerCount": 3,
"hedgesPerMin": 1.3,
"paceVariance": 18.4,
"eyeContactPct": 82,
"fillersPerMin": 1.95,
"pitchVariance": 0.34,
"fillerClusters": [],
"blinkRatePerMin": 13,
"convictionScore": 0.71,
"gazeAwayMoments": [
{
"end": 42.1,
"start": 41.2,
"nearestWord": "cold"
}
],
"hesitationScore": 0.14,
"confidenceRating": 79,
"postureStability": 0.81,
"saccadeRatePerMin": 28,
"gazeFixationAvgSec": 4.3,
"smileAuthenticityAvg": 0.44,
"vocalRangeUtilization": 0.58,
"gestureVocabularyScore": 0.52
}